First formal writing: Words Matter! Draft

Islam has been my way of life since birth, it has taught me how to live for as long as I can remember and it continues to be my way of life. I was always familiar with the word “tawhid”, the oneness of God, but I never truly delved into the idea. When reading “The Tawhidic Paradigm” by Hidayatullah, it was the first time I encountered the phrase “tawhidic paradigm” and read so deeply into the concept.

Tawhid is the central concept of Islam, as Muslims believe that we were created to worship God and God alone. The phrase “tawhidic paradigm” emphasizes the absolute unity and sovereignty of God (11). As Hidayatullah explores the tawhidic paradigm, she also analyzes the feminist aspect of it, specifically pertaining to the Arabic language and the gendering of God in the Quran. Hidayatullah emphasizes that the Quran is God’s word, which transcends us as human beings. The Quran is in the Arabic language, which is itself a translation of God’s divine words into a language humans might be able to grasp a slight understanding of.

In the Quran, God refers to Himself using male pronouns. As Muslims, we know that God has no gender, but because of the complexity and grammar of the Arabic language, God refers to Himself using male pronouns. As an arabic speaker, I have never really thought too deep into the “gendering of God” because it was something I just always understood as a language barrier. Hidayatullah explores how feminist scholars reevaluate interpretations of the Quran, emphasizing the universality of divine attributes beyond gendered conceptions. Through this lens,  Hidayatulla demonstrates how the Tawhidic paradigm also serves as a foundational framework for feminist interpretations of Islam, challenging gender norms and conversations within the Muslim community. By engaging with the Quranic text and the concept of Tawhid, we are able to find a common goal between traditional Islamic thought and feminism. 

3 responses to “First formal writing: Words Matter! Draft”

  1. Sarah Ramsey Avatar
    Sarah Ramsey

    I am a little confused as to what the claim of your essay is. Are you looking more into the tawhidic paradigm, gender of God, or feminism? I think it is a possibility to find a commonality between all three if that is of any interest to you, as what you have so far is an interesting read and I feel like there’s a possibility to go more in depth into these ideas. I think there should also be more citations from the readings to support whatever claim you are making. Overall, I really enjoyed what I read so far but would like a more in-depth dive into these topics.

  2. Maridie Niare Avatar
    Maridie Niare

    I like the idea of you using “Tawhid”, a word you’re familiar with, and your new take on the word due to the reading and the usage of the phrase “tawhidic paradigm”. Providing the general definition of the word as well helps give the reader context to what you’re speaking about.

    I think it’d be interesting if you delved more into examples of what Hidayatullah spoke of in her article of shirk and your takes on it. You could also speak on if you’ve ever seen it exhibited in real life, or other examples in which you’ve seen people, shows, or books do things similar to this. Can also speak about why the tawhidic paradigm is so important.

    Overall good framework, can definitely branch off from there.

  3. Casey Goldberg Avatar
    Casey Goldberg

    This was a really enjoyable read and I thought your writing style was easy to understand, but I’m not sure I know what your main claim is. You have a lot of really interesting ideas about tawhid and gender, but I think you need a clear thesis statement to tie them all back to. I think something that would help this is adding specific evidence from the texts which might help you clarify your point. I also think it might be helpful to more clearly define tawhid and the tawhidic paradigm as a part of delving into Hidayatullah’s feminist take on them. Overall a really great start and a really interesting way to take something you know very intimately and expand on it in a new way!

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